Synthesis 8 – Written Expression
Writing
is an art form. With every “t” that is crossed and every “i” that is dotted,
the flow of words on a page becomes a literary creation, exemplifying the
writer’s thoughts and personality. Writing with teenagers is an experience. The
classroom is filled with personality, loaded with contradictory opinions, a smorgasbord
of ideas, and often a resistance to placing words on a page. Teachers of
writing teach the process of planning, drafting, and revising, but the
manifestation of written words is a daunting task at best for teenagers who
have no desire to put their thoughts and emotions on a sheet of paper.
Conquering a high school student’s resistance to writing is an
undertaking. This week, my ninth grade
hybrid students are in the media center doing a two page research project on
aspects of Julius Caesar’s Roman Empire. The freshmen benchmark test for this nine week
period is on research, and my job is to ensure that the students understand the
varying aspects of MLA formatting and the elements required to search for
information on a specific topic. This week has been difficult. We have ventured
to the media center numerous times throughout the school year, but the casual
observer would think we had never darted the doors of the library. I have
questioned myself repeatedly about the assignment, discussed the process with
numerous knowledgeable peers, and still feel inadequate. On Thursday, I decided
to work independently with pairs of students and explain the formatting
procedures, two at a time. As I made my way around the computer tables, I began
to see progress. I was able to instruct, the students listened, and responded
to my direction.
Creating
a desire in the students to read varying genres of the written word takes skill.
Most of my students have no literature of any form in their homes. It is a
generational issue. Newspapers, magazines, and books are nonexistent on the home
front. It is what they know. The absence of the written word. When stomachs are
growling and concerns about the next meal are priority, teachers wanting
students exposed to literature and writing, take the back burner. The dilemma
is finding balance between what the students know and their ability to write
what they know. Thinking strategically about their message, and getting it on
paper, is frustrating. I have found simplicity to be beneficial. By simplifying
the writing, assigning tasks in increments, and allowing for success, step by
step, the students excel. My job is to increase
exposure to varying texts, because if an individual does not read, it is almost
impossible to write.
Teaching
the writing process begins with the foundations of language - handwriting,
proper grammar, punctuation rules, sentences structure, and spelling. A child
must have the confidence to write a sentence before they can even begin to
assimilate their thoughts into effective writing assignments. The models
discussed in this chapter of the text provide writing strategies that can
easily be adapted into the classroom environment. I especially like the SRSD
model discussed on pages 210 and 202. I plan to implement the time-based
instructional strategy, focus on creating positive attitudes in my students toward
writing, and provide step by step mastery of the writing skills to promote
success.
I admire your love of writing! It certainly is a challenge to motivate our students to not only learn the writing process, but also learn about the mechanics of writing. I like your idea of simplifying the writing by breaking the tasks into smaller increments. I think many of our students don't like writing because it seems so overwhelming to them. It sounds like you're doing a great job with getting your students to understand the writing process.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this particular blog. I think you are very right on all levels concerning the topic of writing! Since I teach ELA, I found what you blogged to be very logical. I like when you noted that the "written word is absent in today's generation." And the fact that literature is non-exsistant on the homefront. Last year I used the literary magazine "Scholastic Action" for that very reason. I thought it was good and they took well to it. But because we're involved in the TAP program, it was brought to my attention that using this magazine was not high enough rigor. It didn't challenge or stretch them enough, so I didn't do it this year.
ReplyDeleteI wish you luck in teaching writing....sounds like you have some good ideas!